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Do you still care?

Contributed by Kiz on Thursday, 24th October 2002 @ 10:15:00 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove



Who's loving my baby, and taking care of you? I need to know right now, do you still care for me? I may have been young but i was ready...to fall inlove with you once again. You tore my heart apart, right from the very start. I didn't know what to do. Gave you my heart, my soul, my time...but i guess that wasn't good enough for you. I just don't understand how i could loose my man. Somebody tell me, all i wanna know is, who's loving my baby and taking care of you? I need to know right now, do you still care for me? You left me standing in the falling rain. Now in my heart there's an empty space. And i never knew that, this love could hurt this way. I sit at home staring at your photo. And all i do is break down and cry. I just don't understand how i could loose my man. I never knew a love like this. Who's loving my baby? And taking care of you, i need to know right now, do you still care for me?




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Re: Do you still care? (User Rating: 1 )
by ginsdance on Thursday, 24th October 2002 @ 01:55:36 PM AEST
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I can completley empathize with this... I went through this for a year. And tonight, and found out the answer to "who's loving my baby?" and I can trust her to do a good job... and because I loved him, I let him go...

I'm not saying that's what you should do... that's just what this made me think of... the grieving over it doesn't get easier, but the pain does lessen in time...

Best of luck,
Gin


Re: Do you still care? (User Rating: 1 )
by Kiz on Sunday, 27th October 2002 @ 01:07:27 AM AEST
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Thanx for that...I'm completely lost without him. It's been a year now. I still can't get over him. He just found someone better and got rid of me, at the time i just pretended i was ok...but I can't get him out of my head. I mean i should beable to, because he's the one that wronged me! I LOVE HIM. he's the only one for me..and now he's gone!


Re: Do you still care? (User Rating: 1 )
by norticus on Friday, 1st November 2002 @ 03:02:28 AM AEST
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This really made me think. I hope all the ex's that I'm made in this world are thinking these same thoughts about me. I think this one was fun I give it a 3.57 on the Nortiscale.


Re: Do you still care? (User Rating: 1 )
by darkeyedman on Sunday, 24th November 2002 @ 10:35:03 PM AEST
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reading this made my heart ache. so full of hurt, so real. wonderful emotion in this poem. jim




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