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You Broke Me
Contributed by
pyrofungus
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Thursday, 8th July 2004 @ 03:17:36 PM in AEST
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I can't hold my hand out to you
Breaking my heart so thin
Gave you all of my time
You broke me and made me die
I can't bare to see you
I can't bare to feel you
I can't bare to rejoice and heal you
My time with you is done
I will not regret you
Just my time I wasted with you
You want me to heal you
To heal your pain
But I am dead
You broke me
Your just shame
I cannot heal
I'm to worn out
I was strong you made me weak
I'm broken don't you see?
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Re: You Broke Me
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by neglected1 on
Thursday, 8th July 2004 @ 03:54:19 PM AEST
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i know i have felt this time too many times before... very well put.. i know it hurts.. put place those pieces back into you... Great write..
luck to you
~neglected1~ |
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Re: You Broke Me
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by matts_sweetie_04 on
Thursday, 8th July 2004 @ 04:22:16 PM AEST
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I loved this poem. I can relate to it completely. My ex best friend and I were best friends for almost 8 years. She totally betrayed me 2 times and then gave me a sob story and since i am a kind hearted person I forgave her. But then she did it again and even though she cried and i felt so bad I did not give in. I let her go. I realized our friendship ment way more to me than it did to her. Like the poem says I dont regret her but I do regret the time i wasted with her.
Greatly written! keep up the good work! |
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Re: You Broke Me
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by WestCPunk on
Thursday, 8th July 2004 @ 05:30:16 PM AEST
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Words like those can really say a lot to a person who has experienced something like that. It reminds of a best friend i used to have for three years and she tore us apart because of her selfish ways and it really did hurt. Thanx for sharing!
Best of Luck
Shelbi |
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Re: You Broke Me
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 9th July 2004 @ 10:16:08 AM AEST
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Your words that you convey speak to many on many levels. Your style is unique as we all are. And I know the feeling of being broken, but heck, we're all just little puzzles waiting to be put back together. You know what I mean?
A job well done here!
Angel always...godspeed...joni |
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Re: You Broke Me
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by CrimsonTears on
Wednesday, 18th August 2004 @ 11:07:56 PM AEST
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i know all too well what it is like to be stabbed in the back by a friend....just recently my best friend of 11 years betrayed me and screwed me over big time....so i know the feeling...excellent job expressing it...great write
Lots of Love
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Re: You Broke Me
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by WestCPunk on
Sunday, 5th September 2004 @ 03:20:50 PM AEST
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nice job i like this alot because it would be something like what i would write to a friend who has done something like this to me and do write things like this i know these feelings all to well
good write
Shelbi
btw lol thnx for all your comments |
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