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inbetween shadows and light
Contributed by
rightwingbrknwing
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Thursday, 8th July 2004 @ 03:00:36 PM in AEST
Topic:
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the meaning of purity seems to have illuded me and now the only thing pure is the thing in which my former definition derived-pain, which is the only thing real-pain in which i wish to feel becuase at least then I know I'm alive instead of a blank white canvas open for creation untouched by any form of devestation only really built by a dream of a past a time in which pain would last night after night and it's come to an end as I result it is loosing my shadow-a dark cloud and yet my best friend, who was at the will of her light which cast him into a corner and destroyed that darkness once again without ever turning on the light but that's alright becuase I'm here now inbetween the light and the shadow trying to resist the rivers rapid downward flow which hell and hevan arn't too far apart but hell could sooth your uncertain soul for all you know-okay-let go.
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Re: inbetween shadows and light
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 8th July 2004 @ 03:11:55 PM AEST
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it is one long rambling sentence that could actually be understandable if grammar and spelling were taken into consideration. The way it is tnow he whole entire meaning is lost in a vast sea of words crushed together and by doing so lost the focus of the poem.
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Re: inbetween shadows and light
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by lovespoetic0518 on
Thursday, 8th July 2004 @ 03:25:20 PM AEST
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ummmm......yeah, what was this supposed to be about again? I agree with Rita.
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Re: inbetween shadows and light
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by rightwingbrknwing on
Thursday, 8th July 2004 @ 04:08:54 PM AEST
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| it was sort of supposed to be about how I'm on the edge of emotion between happiness and depression and I think most of the grammer mistakes are on purpose in an attempt to give the poem a frusterated vibe but i guess i didn't do so well with that or expressing anything but thanks for commenting though. |
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Re: inbetween shadows and light
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by Stoney1 on
Saturday, 10th July 2004 @ 11:42:27 AM AEST
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| ***oh brother!*** |
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