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MARK
Contributed by
lovespoetic0518
on
Thursday, 8th July 2004 @ 02:46:49 PM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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You came into this world, by
the lords request,
Not knowing the fate in your
beginning quest.
This troubled world brought your
life to a sudden close,
Mischief drove in and came to impose.
Heartache echoed through the
thoughts of unexpecting siblings,
As news scattered and confirmed
the dreaded disbelieving.
Questions asked and repeat throughout the day,
To the lord, "Why did it have to happen, to him, this way?"
My mother's eyes weep with no closure still,
As she tells the story, that brought me chills.
I write this poem for him, for them,
To maybe help the loss felt,
And have faith again.
The heavens is where his playground belongs,
Young unscathed, as he's playing along,
Waiting to say, "Mommy, Daddy, what took you so long?"
Copyright ©
lovespoetic0518
... [
2004-07-08 14:46:49]
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Re: MARK
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 8th July 2004 @ 03:06:49 PM AEST
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It is always hard to lose someone you love but the death of a child is so traumatic. A mother never totally seems to recover from that loss. My heart is with you and your family in your grief.
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Re: MARK
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by poet_of_anger on
Wednesday, 4th August 2004 @ 11:04:36 AM AEST
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Your emotion is very visible in this. Yes, losing a loved one is very difficult, and losing a beloved child is even more so, because you think of the times you could have had. Wonderfully written.
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