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Orca ( A Triolet)
Contributed by
Gentledove
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Thursday, 8th July 2004 @ 03:44:43 AM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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Swimming silent in an ocean so vast,
Listening for the sounds of their prey.
Their favorite meal, a fat seal swims fast,
Swimming silent in an ocean so vast.
A trademark of black and white to contrast,
The fin of this creature can be seen by day,
Swimming silent in an ocean so vast,
Listening for the sounds of their prey.
Copyright ©
Gentledove
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2004-07-08 03:44:43]
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Re: Orca ( A Triolet)
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by Stitch on
Thursday, 8th July 2004 @ 03:58:19 AM AEST
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Wow. This is cool. I love how you say so much in so few words. I can picture the whale. They are fascinating creatures, aren't they?
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Re: Orca ( A Triolet)
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by venkat on
Thursday, 8th July 2004 @ 05:23:52 AM AEST
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| Aww very nice poem..venkat |
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Re: Orca ( A Triolet)
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by Psyche on
Thursday, 8th July 2004 @ 07:42:16 AM AEST
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Awesome! I grew up within a mile of Sea World, California... and sometimes all the merchanidised "Shamu" items make one forget about the true speed and stealth of these beautiful whales. (But ohh... Shamu is so sweet!)
Thank you for reminding us of their deadly majesty, as well. My sister in law would love this! |
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Re: Orca ( A Triolet)
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 8th July 2004 @ 07:48:18 AM AEST
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| This is not my favorite format, but I am really enjoying the refreshing posts. It is great to see something different here, nice job! |
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Re: Orca ( A Triolet)
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 8th July 2004 @ 08:17:22 AM AEST
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Lovely poem about an original subject.
Whales are beautiful animals... and mysterious somewhat.
Keep writing. |
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Re: Orca ( A Triolet)
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by Ilhar on
Thursday, 8th July 2004 @ 10:08:28 AM AEST
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I do so like nature writes
Shari |
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Re: Orca ( A Triolet)
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 8th July 2004 @ 11:02:48 AM AEST
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Lena this is a lovely piece of work. I love all the sea creatures. They are so mysterious and beautiful.
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Re: Orca ( A Triolet)
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by buchi on
Thursday, 8th July 2004 @ 12:26:30 PM AEST
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| I love this...is it ok with you if I teach this poem to my class!! |
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Re: Orca ( A Triolet)
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by pixie on
Thursday, 8th July 2004 @ 12:51:17 PM AEST
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beautiful .... great write
pixie xx |
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Re: Orca ( A Triolet)
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by Glo on
Thursday, 8th July 2004 @ 04:11:10 PM AEST
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Very nice write. I'm a nature lover from way back. I see you're new here, hope you plan on staying a while. Nice to meet you. Thanks for the lovely read.
Glo! |
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Re: Orca ( A Triolet)
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by RobertKilpatrick on
Thursday, 8th July 2004 @ 06:30:11 PM AEST
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| Lovely Lovely your poems are great.. 5 points |
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Re: Orca ( A Triolet)
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by Thunderwolf on
Sunday, 11th July 2004 @ 12:09:15 AM AEST
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I love how you pick up these different styles of poetry. Wonderful write babe.
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