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Remembering Never
Contributed by
TorturaInsomniae
on
Thursday, 8th July 2004 @ 02:38:22 AM in AEST
Topic:
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years have passed since the last time
but now i sit and yearn
yearn for my escape
empty halls and no ones home
i sit and cry
tears running down my face
thoughts running through my mind
why cant i go away?
in my room my escape awaits me
i shouldnt go, i shouldnt go
but the pain is so much stronger
walking through the hall
how it seems to suddenly have no end
so dark and so silent
i make my way; stumbling
touching it brings relief
cold but comforting as i remember it
i slowly put the blade to my skin
close my eyes and go away
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TorturaInsomniae
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2004-07-08 02:38:22]
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Re: Remembering Never
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by TheRaven on
Thursday, 8th July 2004 @ 02:55:39 AM AEST
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great piece...very intense, yet simple...keep it up i enjoyed it
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Re: Remembering Never
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by emystar on
Thursday, 8th July 2004 @ 03:30:41 AM AEST
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I want sit here and tell u I like this write 'cause it breaks my heart to read these.
It's really written well, no doubt 'bout that but my heart is sad to read these writes. U write like a pro but please hang in there.
luv, huggs,
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Re: Remembering Never
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by gery_giggles on
Thursday, 8th July 2004 @ 07:56:56 AM AEST
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wow..i know this feeling...the blade can take away the reality we hate...very powerful write
luv always |
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Re: Remembering Never
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by pixie on
Thursday, 8th July 2004 @ 12:52:45 PM AEST
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good write... you've got great style,
pixie xx |
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