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I AM BUT LIKE A LEAF
Contributed by
robertkilpatrick
on
Thursday, 8th July 2004 @ 02:09:20 AM in AEST
Topic:
Haiku
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Like a Leaf
I too
Will fall to the ground
And be mulched
With the soil.
© Robert Kilpatrick
Copyright ©
robertkilpatrick
... [
2004-07-08 02:09:20] (Date/Time posted on
site)
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Re: I AM BUT LIKE A LEAF
(User Rating: 1 ) by Gentledove on
Thursday, 8th July 2004 @ 02:19:03 AM AEST (User
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nice write.
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Re: I AM BUT LIKE A LEAF
(User Rating: 1 ) by shelby on
Thursday, 8th July 2004 @ 12:36:19 PM AEST (User
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beautiful
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Re: I AM BUT LIKE A LEAF
(User Rating: 1 ) by LovingWhispers on
Sunday, 11th July 2004 @ 09:28:59 PM AEST (User
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This is great! I took it so many ways...seeing you with head bowed,reflecting.
I read again and could almost hear the words being spoken as if you were passing on wisdom.A thought provoking lil piece.
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Re: I AM BUT LIKE A LEAF
(User Rating: 1 ) by PumpkinPie on
Wednesday, 28th July 2004 @ 09:42:42 PM AEST (User
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I'm not a haiku fan,most are hard to write,but you've done it !You've portrayed this beautifully.
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Re: I AM BUT LIKE A LEAF
(User Rating: 1 ) by Essentially9 on
Thursday, 5th August 2004 @ 11:56:44 PM AEST (User
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amazing but not in format =] |
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Re: I AM BUT LIKE A LEAF
(User Rating: 1 ) by deadreckoning1983 on
Thursday, 19th August 2004 @ 12:10:02 AM AEST (User
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you are totally awesome and i love you for that.( it's a platonic love i swear) |
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Re: I AM BUT LIKE A LEAF
(User Rating: 1 ) by liquidsunshine on
Monday, 28th February 2005 @ 09:43:25 PM AEST (User
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You know, when I write haikus (which I've only done experimentally when told to do so for a class and such) they always sound forced and I've always thought they weren't something I'd ever enjoy.
However, I certainly enjoyed this. I almost forgot it was a haiku for a moment... and since haikus aren't much more than a moment's worth, that's saying something!!
Lots of love and peace be with you,
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