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GOING NO WHERE
Contributed by
robertkilpatrick
on
Thursday, 8th July 2004 @ 12:40:46 AM in AEST
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One has struck, and stirred the stone
Has made it crumble, scorn and moan
She turns over, the Autumn leaves of Spring
Flies through the Skies, with a Bird on a wing.
And now the heavenly rays fall, on the ground, wet
from rain.
Scoops up the puddles of love and pain, but there is
nothing to gain.
When One realizes that this poem, is going no where
So now, with care, I’ll end it just here.
© ROBERT KILPATRICK
Copyright ©
robertkilpatrick
... [
2004-07-08 00:40:46]
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Re: GOING NO WHERE
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by Essentially9 on
Thursday, 8th July 2004 @ 12:43:27 AM AEST
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| very interesting and nice twist. |
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Re: GOING NO WHERE
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 8th July 2004 @ 12:49:58 AM AEST
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Well, that is definitely unique, to say the least. LMAO. I had to read it twice to make sure I was right about what I read.
LOL,
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Re: GOING NO WHERE
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by Gentledove on
Thursday, 8th July 2004 @ 01:06:39 AM AEST
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interesting. It seems to go no where and yet.....
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Re: GOING NO WHERE
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by Stoney1 on
Thursday, 8th July 2004 @ 02:34:43 AM AEST
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| ****shaking head in despair****muttering to himself****can't believe I clicked on this... |
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Re: GOING NO WHERE
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by Sinful_Misery on
Saturday, 10th July 2004 @ 12:02:21 AM AEST
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| That was a bit of a cool twist, and the poem was good and flowing. |
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Re: GOING NO WHERE
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by blueheart on
Saturday, 10th July 2004 @ 03:12:06 AM AEST
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| Lol. Pretty intresting end. :) |
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Re: GOING NO WHERE
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by darkfairy1188 on
Sunday, 11th July 2004 @ 08:30:42 PM AEST
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| i disagree with stoney1, i liked it. |
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