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Broken Glasses
Contributed by
Psyche
on
Thursday, 8th July 2004 @ 12:04:39 AM in AEST
Topic:
happypoetry
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The world's got better folk,
Since my glasses have got broke.
I now mistake every smirk for a smile.
Biting comments miss their mark
Their expressions lost in dark
& plainest men, now charming, may beguile.
And thus I seek to influence
Yet another's experience
In this vast & wonderous world I now've surveyed
So my plan,
(Now don't you tell! I'm making Heaven out of Hell!)
Is to "misplace" my great-grandmother's hearing aide!
Copyright ©
Psyche
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2004-07-08 00:04:39]
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Re: Broken Glasses
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by RedRose on
Thursday, 8th July 2004 @ 01:40:25 AM AEST
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| Really like, everything would look so much better through cracked glass |
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Re: Broken Glasses
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by Luinil on
Thursday, 8th July 2004 @ 01:45:04 PM AEST
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| haha great poem all around!* |
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Re: Broken Glasses
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 10th July 2004 @ 09:24:39 PM AEST
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Your humour is delicious. I believe we all deserve this "break".
Smiles
Rita |
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Re: Broken Glasses
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 10th July 2004 @ 10:13:46 PM AEST
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hehe! cute:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Broken Glasses
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by Silent-No-More on
Saturday, 10th July 2004 @ 10:21:16 PM AEST
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Delightful! What a wonderful thought process!
Smiles!
SNM |
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Re: Broken Glasses
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by arden on
Sunday, 11th July 2004 @ 09:58:07 PM AEST
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hmmm interesting. cute in a way.
i liked it. well done.
Arden |
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Re: Broken Glasses
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 20th July 2004 @ 01:23:16 PM AEST
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| I promise I won't tell (especially since I agree with you. heh) |
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Re: Broken Glasses
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by hooray_its_jen on
Thursday, 29th July 2004 @ 11:20:25 AM AEST
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Very nice thoughts. I'm glad I clicked on your name, your poems are great!
~Jen
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Re: Broken Glasses
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by Nazmythian on
Monday, 9th August 2004 @ 10:26:22 AM AEST
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Just be certain that with your slightly impaired vision that you don't accidentally misplace her teeth instead ! LOL ( Wait, maybe .... )
Naz ~ |
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Re: Broken Glasses
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 12th February 2005 @ 10:37:26 PM AEST
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| :-) |
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Re: Broken Glasses
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by UnlovedChild on
Sunday, 13th March 2005 @ 03:35:40 AM AEST
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| Fun, make - you - smile poem. Great write , love the end! |
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