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MAYBE NOT
Contributed by
ceci
on
Wednesday, 7th July 2004 @ 10:27:35 PM in AEST
Topic:
StoryPoetry
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SOMETIMES I FEEL IT'S OVER
MOST OF THE TIME I FEEL IT STARTS ALL OVER AGAIN
IS JUST THAT I CAN'T RESIST
TO THOSE UNIQUE EYES
AND THAT BEAUTIFUL SMILE
YOU HAVE CONVERTED TO THE 2ND PERSON
I WILL NEVER FORGET
AND YOU'LL GROW UP AWAY FROM ME
JUST LIKE THE 1ST ONE DID
IT'S HARD TO LET YOU GO
WHEN I'VE NEVER HAD YOU
I REALLY NEED TO KNOW
WHAT YOUR EYES ARE TRYING TO TELL ME
IT INTRIGUES ME
THAT I DON'T KNOW THAT LANGUAGE OF YOURS
WE WERE MEANT TO BE TOGETHER
LIKE IDENTICAL SOULS
LIKED THE SAME THINGS
THOUGHT THE SAME THINGS
EXCEPT THE THOUGHT OF BEING TOGETHER
MAYBE WE WEREN'T IDENTICAL SOULS
MAYBE WE WEREN'T MEANT TO BE TOGETHER
THEN WHY ARE YOU STILL IN MY LIFE?
DO YOU KNOW THE REASON OF WHY YOU ARE IN MY LIFE?
MAYBE TO LET ME KNOW
THAT THE ONE I WILL FALL IN LOVE WITH
AND WILL FALL IN LOVE WITH ME
IS WAY BETTER THAN YOU, YOU THINK?
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ceci
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2004-07-07 22:27:35] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: MAYBE NOT
(User Rating: 1 ) by tbird on
Thursday, 8th July 2004 @ 06:51:00 AM AEST (User
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It started off well enough, but became repetitive and verbose. Keep writing!! |
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