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Pain of Life
Contributed by
essentially9
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Wednesday, 7th July 2004 @ 10:26:04 PM in AEST
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DarkPoetry
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Pain of Life
I'll make you bleed
I'll make you scream
I'll make you writhe
Your blood is mine
You're under my control
You'll die to unleash my hold
You'll die in my control
I am Mord-Sith
Pain while alive
I decide when you die
I twist you to be mine
You're mine till you die
I'll give you scars
That never heal
I'll give you pain
We both can feel
Your blood is mine to shed
I am the Mistress of Death
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2004-07-07 22:26:04]
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Re: Pain of Life
(User Rating: 1 )
by tbird on
Thursday, 8th July 2004 @ 06:54:01 AM AEST
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| There is nothing wrong with fictional poetry, but I can feel that you really don't relate to what you have written. It's important to be honest in your writing and express the truth that resides within you. |
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Re: Pain of Life
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by Luinil on
Thursday, 8th July 2004 @ 01:56:54 PM AEST
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| i actually think it's quite good... it's very dark and descriptive* |
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