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Tragic Ending
Contributed by
punkprincess6689
on
Wednesday, 7th July 2004 @ 09:19:41 PM in AEST
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drinkin that nite wasn't smart
that was the reason for you're depart
getting into the car
and wanting to go far
the car hit a tree
and now your spirit roams free
drinking and driving the police said
was the reason you were now dead
you felt you didn't belong
but i was here along
waiting for you to come see me
so i could tell you all you could be
now i'm depressed
because i shouldn't of kepy my feelings repressed
your life i should of tried to save
instead you are now in a grave
now you're looking down from the sky
and i never got a chance to say good-bye
Copyright ©
punkprincess6689
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2004-07-07 21:19:41]
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Re: Tragic Ending
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by WestCPunk on
Wednesday, 7th July 2004 @ 10:42:34 PM AEST
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That was sad. Hope you're ok!
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Re: Tragic Ending
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by Essentially9 on
Wednesday, 7th July 2004 @ 10:47:41 PM AEST
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| i write things such as this all the time, except they commit suicide, so yeah that gets old quick. but the thing about this and those that i write is that it happens too many times. |
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Re: Tragic Ending
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by freespirit on
Wednesday, 7th July 2004 @ 11:57:45 PM AEST
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Good Write hope that people that drink and drive will read this
God Bless
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Re: Tragic Ending
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by Trisha on
Thursday, 22nd July 2004 @ 10:07:39 PM AEST
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| Dear Kim. I Am Sorry About This. I Hate People That Drink And Drive. I Do Believe That's Why People Are Dieing At There. |
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Re: Tragic Ending
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by coolbreeze17 on
Wednesday, 5th October 2005 @ 11:07:00 PM AEST
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| drinking a driving is stupid.. and people just shouldnt do..it would save alot of good people...nice write |
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