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Let Me Go...
Contributed by
evilfairy
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Wednesday, 7th July 2004 @ 07:32:05 PM in AEST
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Feeling the need to break free
Free from these chains that tie me
Down to the earth so I can’t move
Gotta cut loose – got so much to prove!
Always playing the parts others cast aside
Never get to play my own part, no matter how I’ve tried
Just need to be let go so I can find my way
Need to find my own life without these hassles everyday
Stop calling me mother, when you know I am not
If there was a time you didn’t rely on me I’ve forgot
And please, please stop calling me your best friend
I’ll be there for you but am I the only one on whom you can depend?
Please let me go and stand on your own feet
If you’re gonna act crazy you gotta take the heat
My job in this world is not to sweep up after you
There’s so much more out there I have yet to do
Just set me free and take a step back
Letting me go won’t colour your world black
You’d probably find all the colours of the rainbow
All our lives could be improved….if you'd just let me go
MW 08.07.04
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Re: Let Me Go...
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by 2ndChance on
Wednesday, 7th July 2004 @ 07:39:32 PM AEST
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| I know what you mean. There is too much lying on me...I am trying to escape...it's all adding up...and the numbers are never in my favor... |
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Re: Let Me Go...
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by xxbreathlessx on
Wednesday, 7th July 2004 @ 07:41:23 PM AEST
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| wow i loved it , you did an awesome job on this!!!!!! |
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Re: Let Me Go...
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by OMEGA_ on
Wednesday, 7th July 2004 @ 07:46:14 PM AEST
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Well actually it's amazing
you do write so pretty good
you are so talented
i beleive in your words so you succeded in getting out your burried feelings through words that others can read so you are a good writer
keep writing us more i'd like to read more and more |
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Re: Let Me Go...
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by tifrob on
Wednesday, 7th July 2004 @ 09:52:32 PM AEST
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Well, I'm odd man out I guess. Your poem read well enough. I just thought it was harsh.
"Stop calling me mother" - thats hard. We all have days we'd like to escape, but not totally.
I just can't understand this. To me this poem shows a hate for this child. I hope your family never finds this poem. You may get your wish. You may end up being odd man out.
Goodluck and God be with you & your family,
J~
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Re: Let Me Go...
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by evilfairy on
Wednesday, 7th July 2004 @ 10:03:15 PM AEST
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| i'm not her mother...i'm her sister |
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Re: Let Me Go...
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by pixie on
Thursday, 8th July 2004 @ 01:08:59 PM AEST
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very powerful write........ you have such a talent Evilfairy......
takecare
pixie xx |
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Re: Let Me Go...
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by katyqueen35 on
Thursday, 8th July 2004 @ 01:34:50 PM AEST
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evilfairy
That is such an great emotional write..
I really really like this poem.
thank you for sharing...:-)
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