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A Silent Rhythm
Contributed by
omega_
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Wednesday, 7th July 2004 @ 07:12:20 PM in AEST
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So long time ago and I clearly hear that Silent rhythm of your song
Whipping baby I was, chasing your vision
Your angel spirit around me was passing by,
Everytime I see your face, your smile stops my cry...
Years go by and your face who I never met before don’t leave my head
Your fascination kiss, your healing cuddle and your warmth whisper teasing my ears
The feel of your hands rounding my back and your existence beside me on bed
Maybe you are real, maybe you are just in my only dream
Maybe you are so near, and maybe you are so far
I live on that hope of finding you
With every falling star
But, what if you are real?
Do you dream of my face like I dream of yours everynight and day?
Do you hear my recalls to you like I do hear yours?
While I’m walking, while I’m talking and while I lie
Now am writing to you on a hope that you reply
And then I’ll torn this paper into millions of pieces
Throwing them through the sky
Maybe one reaches your hand
But will you know that it is I?
Copyright ©
omega_
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Re: A Silent Rhythm
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by OMEGA_ on
Wednesday, 7th July 2004 @ 07:21:31 PM AEST
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Actually this poem based on an idea between me and a freind who i appreciate so much we dealed that each of us will write a poem about this idea as we recall eachothers since we've born and we both hear the same Rythm all that time... well i finished my poem since the 1st day of the deal and that was long time ago, so i hope she do her poem one day...
but i miss her anyway |
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Re: A Silent Rhythm
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by evilfairy on
Wednesday, 7th July 2004 @ 07:36:19 PM AEST
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loved your poem omega.....
i kinda believe in this......a soul mate ..... your destiny ..... |
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Re: A Silent Rhythm
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by xxbreathlessx on
Wednesday, 7th July 2004 @ 07:46:05 PM AEST
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| wow its beautiful, i especially liked how you wrote the begining , it was awesome |
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Re: A Silent Rhythm
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 7th July 2004 @ 08:04:35 PM AEST
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oh, how sweetly and beautiful written, hugs n' love nessa
@->>->:- |
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Re: A Silent Rhythm
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by RobertKilpatrick on
Saturday, 10th July 2004 @ 05:50:40 PM AEST
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| Hey this is a really really nice poem. I enjoyed this..Great stuff.. |
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Re: A Silent Rhythm
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by Broken_Skin on
Sunday, 11th July 2004 @ 05:45:51 AM AEST
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This made me smile all the way through
very touching, that girl is lucky to have/ever
of had you..
x |
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Re: A Silent Rhythm
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by Socke on
Sunday, 25th July 2004 @ 01:33:54 PM AEST
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u already know that I love this poem and I'm very sorry that I still didn't finish mine....but I always find something in it which make me write it again and again and I will only send it when I feel that it is perfect! Sorry!
I LOVE U SO MUCH
kisses
Lis |
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