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Memories
Contributed by
darkfairy1188
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Wednesday, 7th July 2004 @ 05:50:08 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Memories so sweet.
Memories so sad.
You did more than kiss my feet.
The ecstasy made me go mad.
You always said you’d never marry.
I guess I never believed you.
You left me with a babe to carry.
All alone, missing you.
You didn’t care how I felt.
Didn’t bother to explain.
I probably could have helped;
Made you want me again.
So now you’re gone.
Out of my life.
And I am left with nothing;
But this sharp-bladed knife.
It would be so easy;
Just to end it all.
But the thought makes me queasy.
I feel as though I might fall.
So down I go.
Farther and farther.
And suddenly “NO!”
It hurts so much.
The baby is gone.
It didn’t even get to feel my touch.
It is already done.
No going back.
What do I do now?
When all I want is you back?
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Re: Memories
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by apollo on
Wednesday, 7th July 2004 @ 06:01:14 PM AEST
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wow. this is very touching. it seems more and more are picking up the razor blade. quite sad but you have to do what makes you happy. just do not do anything silly because you sound like a really good person and your writing is very inspiring.
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Re: Memories
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by Fionndruinne on
Wednesday, 7th July 2004 @ 06:04:06 PM AEST
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Very vivid and sad. Well done! You have excellent expression.
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Re: Memories
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by Colleen on
Thursday, 8th July 2004 @ 09:26:33 AM AEST
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| I have read all of your poetry that you posted on here so far and it is so awesome! Yeah, it's kind of morbid too, but you'll have that around here. I'm sorry you feel that way. I love you! |
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Re: Memories
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by skyblumoon on
Friday, 13th August 2004 @ 01:50:41 PM AEST
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Vary powerful, I could feel your loss. Excellent.
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