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Last Words
Contributed by
essentially9
on
Wednesday, 7th July 2004 @ 03:56:08 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Last Words
You know it's the truth
I know it is you
They died because of you
You can't admit the truth
Afraid of what it'll do to you
Your last words killed them
You couldn't leave it at that
You destroyed them
And you deserve to die
Because of that
You killed them
You wanted them to die
You're glad you made them
Commit suicide
You can't bare
What's on your hands
The blood they shed
The fear they had
From what you said
They died for nothing
As it stands
Blood on your hands
As it stands
They died for nothing
From what you said
And you die
By suicide
For what you did
The death of them
As it stands
Blood on your hands
You deserve it
For what you did
To them
A life for a life
As it stands
Copyright ©
essentially9
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2004-07-07 15:56:08]
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Re: Last Words
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by Archie on
Wednesday, 7th July 2004 @ 04:09:05 PM AEST
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| Whoa, the poem of retribution is very ominous and dreary yet in some respect true. |
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Re: Last Words
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by Jenni_K on
Wednesday, 7th July 2004 @ 04:39:10 PM AEST
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Wow!! Deep....
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Re: Last Words
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by WestCPunk on
Wednesday, 7th July 2004 @ 05:01:27 PM AEST
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Trippin lol nice job
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Re: Last Words
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by yellow_sundragon on
Wednesday, 7th July 2004 @ 05:25:35 PM AEST
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wow... great poem... almost... errie...
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