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Shoes?
Contributed by
Mick_Puttock
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Wednesday, 7th July 2004 @ 03:50:21 PM in AEST
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After going bare footed for the last 20 years
it was time to change and forget the fears
so out I went and bought some shoes
but now, oh no, here comes the blues
they come without instructions to wear
with funny looking strings up on the front there
and pray tell, for I've had a look quick
where do I find the "turn it on" switch
I thought they would help me and walk on their own
maybe it's my money, that I have just blown.
Copyright ©
Mick_Puttock
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Re: Shoes?
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by Jenni_K on
Wednesday, 7th July 2004 @ 03:53:40 PM AEST
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Lmao!!! Maybe you can get rid of those 'thongs' now"..lol..
Ok..Ok....here are the instructions---->
Take the string from the left side shoe...
Tie it in a knot to the right side too...
Make sure it's all nice and tight
Then you'll be able to walk all night... :>)
Be sure to follow them to the T
(((((((hugs))))))))
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Re: Shoes?
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 7th July 2004 @ 04:05:50 PM AEST
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Ha Ha! You blew your money on SHOES!
Could've gotten the velcro ones, with lil' lightbulbs that blink! lol Well my son loves those kind.
Cute write from the master...webmaster that is. :-) teeheehee
Angel always...joni |
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 7th July 2004 @ 04:13:34 PM AEST
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I hate shoes!!!!!!!!! That is the first thing I take off when I enter the house. Should of got some boots. Boots were made for walking, LOLOLOL.
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Re: Shoes?
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 7th July 2004 @ 04:19:53 PM AEST
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cute! hehe, mick,
i read jennis instructions though
it sounds like you'll fall on your nose
if you take the left shoe and right
and tie them together tight!
it great to see you posting, your such a lovely writer:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Shoes?
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by _Raspberry_ on
Wednesday, 7th July 2004 @ 04:34:02 PM AEST
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| Cute!! Great write, it sure made me smile |
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Re: Shoes?
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by Kie on
Wednesday, 7th July 2004 @ 04:35:53 PM AEST
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I thought your poem was so cute and filled with laughter.
All I could think of was days of childhood and loving the feel of oozing mud between my toes until it was so thick I couldn't keep my balance.
Now I have the opposite problem, I simply can't get enough of shoes.
It was nice to see you posting.
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Re: Shoes?
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by Archie on
Wednesday, 7th July 2004 @ 04:52:52 PM AEST
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| Very funny indeed. I can't really do funny yet in my poems but I can learn from reading your poems. |
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Re: Shoes?
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by liquidsunshine on
Wednesday, 7th July 2004 @ 05:01:29 PM AEST
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**giggles over this cutesy poem...which I like very much, by the by**
Aww, poor Mick. Maybe I'll lend ya my poem-worthy light-up sandals....
Okay, maybe not... but I'll get ya some cool lookin socks... they're not so hard to figure out
;-)
Lots of love and peace be with you,
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Re: Shoes?
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by Angelic_Demon on
Wednesday, 7th July 2004 @ 06:25:50 PM AEST
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*bursts out into a fit of giggles* This is a good one.
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Re: Shoes?
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by Gentledove on
Wednesday, 7th July 2004 @ 06:44:43 PM AEST
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A cool write. Love it.
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Re: Shoes?
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by LOWMAN613 on
Wednesday, 7th July 2004 @ 10:44:59 PM AEST
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I know Mick some of these shoes they have out now are crazy!LOL
Cute write! Christina |
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Re: Shoes?
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by forever_lonely on
Thursday, 8th July 2004 @ 08:45:35 AM AEST
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LOL, most entertaining mick
The everlasting Conundrum of shoes lol
Ya know shoes do worry me slightly lol and i beeen using them for god knows 18 years now lol
They've got shoes with springs in them now and everything i mean whats that all about,
One waits for the day when they invent shoes that walk for you, for then my dream of never even having to walk anywhere but still get where im going will be done lol
Great write
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Re: Shoes?
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by Jenni_K on
Thursday, 8th July 2004 @ 09:27:10 AM AEST
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"One waits for the day when they invent shoes that walk for you, for then my dream of never even having to walk anywhere but still get where im going will be done lol"
That's what Mick was hoping he'd get, Luke.. Too bad he still has to walk....
Jenni
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by pixie on
Thursday, 8th July 2004 @ 01:13:21 PM AEST
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hahahaha great write Mick, made me smile from ear to ear, something I really needed to read today...
pixie xx |
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Re: Shoes?
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by critterhideaway on
Tuesday, 13th July 2004 @ 02:27:04 PM AEST
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| You made me laugh today, I needed that. Thank you for this. |
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Re: Shoes?
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by Silent-No-More on
Sunday, 1st August 2004 @ 03:30:17 AM AEST
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lol! Mick! I happen to read this after deciding to take a break from fighting with my own in process silly write! Then... I got to thinking maybe I shouldn't post it. BUT... ha! since you 'went there' -- I will too! Thanks for the inspiration!
A true believer that occational silliness is a must -
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Re: Shoes?
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by emystar on
Monday, 9th August 2004 @ 04:46:41 AM AEST
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I hate shoes and have been known to walk in snow bare foot.
Very cute write, light hearted and thought prvoking.
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy |
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