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I hear the voice
Contributed by
Archie
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Wednesday, 7th July 2004 @ 03:17:57 PM in AEST
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I hear a voice
praying in the garden as his friends all sleep
I see the blood
pouring down his forehead as he sits in grief
"If this is your will-
Father take this cup away from me.
Give me another choice.
But not as I will
for I came to earth to suffer torment
so that man can be free."
I see the crowd
walking through the garden with their swords in hand.
And with a kiss
a savior is betrayed into the hands of man.
Will you use a sword?
After I have been with you for all of this time.
Let me make it known
this must all come to past so that God's will is done
Everyone is screaming
Everyone is shouting
"LET THE LORD BE CRUCIFIED"
I hear their vioce: can it be mine?
If this is your will
Father take this cup away from me
Give me another choice
But not as I will
for I came to earth to suffer torment
so that man can be free
I see a cross
standing in the center of the place called Skull
A man hangs there;
battered and beaten he is in torment.
"Father where are you.
Can you tell me why you have forsaken me
Father forgive them
for they do not know what they are doing."
Everyone is screaming
Everyone is shouting
"LET THE LORD BE CRUCIFIED"
I hear their voice
(I hear their voice)
I hear their voice
and it was mine
Copyright ©
Archie
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2004-07-07 15:17:57]
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Re: I hear the voice
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 7th July 2004 @ 03:22:34 PM AEST
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This is a stunning piece of work. I have missed you.
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Re: I hear the voice
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by Jenni_K on
Wednesday, 7th July 2004 @ 03:23:51 PM AEST
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Congratulations, Archie..... What an awesome write to celebrate your 50th..
Hugs
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Re: I hear the voice
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 7th July 2004 @ 03:25:12 PM AEST
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Veery good write.
We all have our own rendition as writers but I luv the way u wrote this one. We can never write too much about that day.
Very touching.
luv, huggs,
emy |
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Re: I hear the voice
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by Essentially9 on
Wednesday, 7th July 2004 @ 03:46:58 PM AEST
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| congrats on your 50th. some of this had the tone of the bible, which i thought just made this piece more real considering the topic. excellent write as always. =] |
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Re: I hear the voice
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by Kie on
Wednesday, 7th July 2004 @ 03:52:32 PM AEST
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This is wonderful news, congratulations and may you write many, many more, unending.
The ending was very powerful.
I not only appreciated your words, I was moved by them as well.
Kie |
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Re: I hear the voice
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by Fionndruinne on
Wednesday, 7th July 2004 @ 05:42:44 PM AEST
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Bravo! This is very vivid and moving.
And it is well for us to grasp the concept that we share in the decisions of humanity (and hence the blame), simply because we are part of it. Strange concept for a rebellious individualist like myself.
Thank you for this most beautiful piece. God bless.
Andrew |
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Re: I hear the voice
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 7th July 2004 @ 06:55:05 PM AEST
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beautifully written, archie:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: I hear the voice
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by TOB4GIVEN on
Tuesday, 19th October 2004 @ 10:00:47 PM AEST
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GOD BLESS,
BEAUTIFUL POEM. IT SO WRONG WHAT THEY DID TO HIM. BUT HE DID IT ALL JUST FOR US. SO WE CAN HAVE SALVATION. SO WE CAN HAVE A CHANCE TO GET IT RIGHT.
GWENDOLYN |
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