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TO YOU

Contributed by SA_RA on Thursday, 24th October 2002 @ 06:30:00 AM in AEST
Topic: LoveRemembered

TO YOU
This day is my desire immensity after thou,
no solely passing away into you,
joyfulness, pleasure.
You alluding me
and you know everything.
You giving to me your's own syrupy moment
and I tell you: YES!

WAS YOU REALLY READY FOR ME?
Why you so quiet now
and with bowed head on your chest?
Was all past nights pour over you for nothing,
and you can't see that the pain is getting bigger?
But nevertheless, each wave flow just to your arms
and each spring who suddenly leap on,
they related only one love: OURS!

IN THAT MOMENT YOU WERE ALL MINE!
I am nothing else but thought who following you.
Ah, if you could know to moment stop,
than a premonition have not raving of storm.
When the clouds changing their own picture,
you asking me, is the sun on the earth yet...
Are you gone on your way for this reason with no tears...
Than I still live further
althought it not seems that is everything well...
Will be this my memorial
when is only adjective
who left for me:
YOU ARE NOT BESIDE OF ME!

LATER, MUCH LATER,
when a corn fall of one's own leaves
and colour is no more red.
There is no grass that can be rustle in the wind.
I'm still rambling on the fields, but I love you right there.
I don't know if you feel how my heart beat,
but I'm still waiting at your word.
You are somewhere where is the end of shadow
and you are afraid that the anguish is all over wind round.
Everything not sink to oblivion, maybe...
And I lie down in the evening in my empty bed,
it's remind me, that you were been.

Copyright © SA_RA ... [ 2002-10-24 06:30:00]
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Re: TO YOU (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Saturday, 31st July 2004 @ 11:45:51 PM AEST
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great write.

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