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DO NOT READ THIS!!!
Contributed by
socialmisfit
on
Wednesday, 7th July 2004 @ 01:26:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
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This is the one title
Guaranteed to draw a crowd
For there is nothing more curious
Than a human being
They walk blindly into the dark
Confident of nothing
But their own inquisitiveness
Eyes closed; un-seeing
And now YOU have
Followed your instincts
Let your heart lead the way
Instead of your head
Ventured in despite the warning
Just for the thrill of it
Not knowing what
Will be said
Well, to satisfy your lust
And to reward your daring
I have some words of wisdom
That I will now be sharing
And you can bask
In your wanton glory
For only those who dared
Will hear my story…
Think back
To your childhood years
All the laughter
All the tears
Remember what your mother said
See those pictures
In your head
Consider all that was before
Recall your life just once more
For I know what it is you see
Because those memories are ME!
You’re just a reminiscence
Of a past existence
A relic of a wayward thought
Add it up, you come to Nought
And the final irony?
You’re not YOU
You are ME!
So, if you are thinking
Think again
You an illusion
In my brain
And, finally, now that you are here
I can erase you (can you feel the fear?)
Goodbye forever, you don't exist
Your last thought?
DO NOT READ THIS!!!!!!!
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2004-07-07 13:26:00]
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Re: DO NOT READ THIS!!!
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by _Raspberry_ on
Wednesday, 7th July 2004 @ 01:52:39 PM AEST
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| This was awesome!! Great write! |
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Re: DO NOT READ THIS!!!
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by PieceOfABrokenSoul on
Wednesday, 7th July 2004 @ 04:28:15 PM AEST
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| Wow, you need to publish this one. |
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Re: DO NOT READ THIS!!!
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by buchi on
Wednesday, 7th July 2004 @ 04:58:19 PM AEST
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| Oh yes...this is my kinda poem...loved it |
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Re: DO NOT READ THIS!!!
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by eternityandaday4u on
Wednesday, 7th July 2004 @ 06:05:20 PM AEST
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| wow i fell in love with this poem! you have alot of talent. this poem makes people think. that was an awesome write. your right the title does reach out and just grab your attention. i loved it keep em coming! |
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Re: DO NOT READ THIS!!!
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by Sinful_Misery on
Thursday, 8th July 2004 @ 08:13:00 PM AEST
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| Geez, this is awesome! I read it 3 times. Very well written, very well!!! |
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Re: DO NOT READ THIS!!!
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by Wachumiri on
Sunday, 11th July 2004 @ 05:08:45 PM AEST
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Rather good poem, though I must say I didn't read it for the title... sorry. It was the first one on the list, fo That's where I started. Well, sense you're about to erase me, GOODBYE CRUEL WORLD!
Have fun, and keep on writing, I see great talant in your work.
Take care.
David |
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Re: DO NOT READ THIS!!!
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 11th July 2004 @ 05:16:13 PM AEST
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I never clicked on your poem title. I followed wachumiri's last comment, thus;
"Wachumiri: DO NOT READ TH.."
I didn't know it mean 'this', so i'm not curious in your particular context. However, It was a good, thoughtful poem, but alas, I have dememorized you first . . . so, um - I'll click the OK button and go somewhere else. Nice not knowing you anymore. |
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Re: DO NOT READ THIS!!!
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by SuperGirl on
Sunday, 11th July 2004 @ 07:27:44 PM AEST
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| this was funny!! yes , it actually made me smile......great job!!! i loved it!!! you have such a talent!!! |
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