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The Universe
Contributed by
Gentledove
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Wednesday, 7th July 2004 @ 01:00:34 PM in AEST
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Haiku
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Planets, stars aloft
Constellations, cosmic dust
Celestial splendor
Copyright ©
Gentledove
... [
2004-07-07 13:00:34]
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Re: The Universe
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by Stitch on
Wednesday, 7th July 2004 @ 01:08:13 PM AEST
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Wonderful. A great exercise in brevity and yes, you did say so much.
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Re: The Universe
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 7th July 2004 @ 01:08:56 PM AEST
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Gay, this is a tremendously strong haiku. Thank you for sharing.
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Re: The Universe
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by Ilhar on
Wednesday, 7th July 2004 @ 02:41:38 PM AEST
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well done
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Re: The Universe
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by Jenni_K on
Wednesday, 7th July 2004 @ 05:32:04 PM AEST
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Astounding words.....great haiku....
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Re: The Universe
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 7th July 2004 @ 06:11:43 PM AEST
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this is truely one of the most beautiful haikus i have read:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: The Universe
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by RobertKilpatrick on
Thursday, 8th July 2004 @ 01:11:48 AM AEST
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| Love it.. Love this kind of Poem. Great . |
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Re: The Universe
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by Glo on
Thursday, 8th July 2004 @ 04:14:18 PM AEST
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You write such a beautiful picture. *smiles* I can almost see your Celestial Splendor. Wonderful write.
Glo! |
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Re: The Universe
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by Thunderwolf on
Sunday, 11th July 2004 @ 12:10:26 AM AEST
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super write babe.
love ya Thunderwolf |
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Re: The Universe
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by Essentially9 on
Thursday, 5th August 2004 @ 11:58:04 PM AEST
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| amazing and well written. |
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