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my hill
Contributed by
vampyrekiss
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Wednesday, 7th July 2004 @ 10:27:08 AM in AEST
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I sit on my precious hill,
And look down on your 'civilisation',
Watching you slowly destroy each other.
And I will smile, When I see destruction,
For I will be safe,
In my solitary confinement,
That you kept me in,
To keep me safe from humanity,
To keep me safe from myself.
But you saved me too late.
I am already damaged.
I'm no longer yours to keep.
I am a tainted decoration.
Copyright ©
vampyrekiss
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2004-07-07 10:27:08]
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Re: my hill
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by ArdRi79 on
Wednesday, 7th July 2004 @ 10:30:59 AM AEST
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A good read and an inspiring one
"I am a tainted decoration" thats a deep line.congratulations on cramming so much meaning into so few words |
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Re: my hill
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 15th August 2004 @ 08:48:55 PM AEST
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| Good write! Although if civilization is destroyed, so are our voices in this 'net' context and perhaps even you will miss it! All the best... |
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