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Walking Home By Myself
Contributed by
tbird
on
Wednesday, 7th July 2004 @ 08:14:58 AM in AEST
Topic:
mystical
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self-induced
mind-born pathogens
discharge from
delusion to feed upon
ignorance that boasts
of unfulfilled desires.
time-released
self pity
infuses the soul
with kaleidoscope confusion
submerged in emotion,
content to chronicle
imagined slights
against us
than inspect our own hand
immersed in reproach.
to douse the prevarications
in the fires of discriminative thought
promises to provide reilef
but will the mind uncurl
to dispense the anecdote?
Copyright ©
tbird
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2004-07-07 08:14:58]
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Re: Walking Home By Myself
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by ArdRi79 on
Wednesday, 7th July 2004 @ 10:50:50 AM AEST
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| I liked this convoluted lil write, the self deprecation at the end added a tinge of fun to the intricate web, well done. |
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Re: Walking Home By Myself
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by gery_giggles on
Thursday, 8th July 2004 @ 06:43:15 AM AEST
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wow...great write...i loved this line:self pity
infuses the soul
with kaleidoscope confusion"
it sums up how i'm feeling right now!...the flow of the poem is great to..different from my normal reads^_^
luv always |
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Re: Walking Home By Myself
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by ilimow on
Friday, 9th July 2004 @ 10:42:49 PM AEST
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Finished reading but still
admiring your imagination :) |
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Re: Walking Home By Myself
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 10th July 2004 @ 11:27:25 PM AEST
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good question, beautifully human write:) hugs n' love nessa
@->>->:- |
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Re: Walking Home By Myself
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by ScreenSaver77 on
Saturday, 2nd April 2005 @ 04:48:14 AM AEST
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Well done, this poem you wrote, really shows you have talent. Hope to read some more...
Best Wishes
Helgard |
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