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Fractional Loss of Intimacy
Contributed by
spaceotter
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Wednesday, 23rd October 2002 @ 08:15:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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It hurts-
In every bone, muscle...
It hurts-
Going on through the day-
Week-
Month, year.
It's there, in the back.
Searing through the present reality,
Not letting me forget.
It hurts-
I go on, sometimes caught up-
Then I realize the tapping.
In the quiet moments it's unbearable.
Racking my soul.
I realize the injustice this small, little...
INCONSIDERATE,
Action has caused you.
I mourn that fractional loss of intimacy this has spawned.
Copyright ©
spaceotter
... [
2002-10-23 20:15:00]
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Re: Fractional Loss of Intimacy
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by aernby on
Wednesday, 23rd October 2002 @ 10:10:05 PM AEST
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Good write --- fine insight --- well done
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Re: Fractional Loss of Intimacy
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Thursday, 24th October 2002 @ 06:05:24 AM AEST
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Hey, Aernby, I can't remember telling you my problems!! Yet you write so well about them..lol..... well done!!
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Re: Fractional Loss of Intimacy
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by OreO on
Monday, 28th October 2002 @ 09:47:15 PM AEST
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This is so deep and personal
I would never look at somthing
like this as inconsiderate.
Beautiful write, very well expressed
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::. |
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