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?????????????????
Contributed by
socialmisfit
on
Wednesday, 7th July 2004 @ 02:56:17 AM in AEST
Topic:
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why am I living?
when will I die?
is this all a circus
just another grand lie
will I wake up one moment
and every one say surprise
will I reach the pearly gates
or is it a mere fantasy of mine
do I search for an answer
of have I found it and its before my eyes
living without questions
is dieing without answers
curiosity has found me
and now I will die
to answer all the questions
to unveil all the lie's
in a second will I know
in a second will I try
that is the reason
for my suicide
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2004-07-07 02:56:17]
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Re: ?????????????????
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by lostinmyself on
Wednesday, 7th July 2004 @ 05:38:22 AM AEST
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Good write,
I think we all ask these questions. Or at least ask similar questions.
I want the answers too.
I love the first four lines.
Great write, *hugs* Phil xxx |
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Re: ?????????????????
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by Sinful_Misery on
Thursday, 8th July 2004 @ 08:18:49 PM AEST
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| Excellent write, your poems are awesome! I think so much the same way :) |
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Re: ?????????????????
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by grip-wth-broken-fingers on
Wednesday, 14th July 2004 @ 03:17:00 AM AEST
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| beautiful write nice way of putting suicide i guess ur good with ur words xgripx |
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