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The long lost wind...to carry me through...
Contributed by
Living_In_My_Dream
on
Wednesday, 7th July 2004 @ 02:20:06 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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I want to bleed
Satisfy this need
Forget I live
For all I give
I need to cut
It's in my gut
The need
To bleed
Water, Spring, Life
Ice, Winter, Knife
Alone in the dark
Looking for my lark.
My lonely lark
With that special mark
Of love and beauty
And of faithful duty.
Call me greedy
Call me needy
I only crave love
The kind of...
A lonely seashore
Leaves me wanting more
To find that one
To take this ton.
To bleed is to live
To die is to give
Give me a blade
My future is made
Not to go on
It was a con
My life...
A knife
A dove, a lark
A light for the dark
Maybe you?
If not, then who?
I have no where to turn
I want to die and burn
You give me everything
Yet, you give me nothing
Crying and dying
Your lying
To me...
I live for you
I die for you
I cry for you
I want you
I need you
I love you
I hate you
I love you...
I love you...
I love you...
Don't you see it?
The pain, the hurt
Don't you feel my love?
I love you
You hate me...
Love
Hurt
Bleeding
Pain
Cutting
Dying
Kiss me
Kill me
Bleed me
Leave me...
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Living_In_My_Dream
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2004-07-07 02:20:06]
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Re: The long lost wind...to carry me through...
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by the_story_of_the_year on
Wednesday, 7th July 2004 @ 02:26:38 AM AEST
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| The confusion and un-organized nature of this write make it enjoyable. Good job friend. |
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Re: The long lost wind...to carry me through...
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by wakegurl77 on
Wednesday, 7th July 2004 @ 09:55:07 AM AEST
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Great poem i cant totally relate you can just put into words better than i
Allways sincere
Leana |
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Re: The long lost wind...to carry me through...
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by Luinil on
Thursday, 8th July 2004 @ 02:09:15 PM AEST
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| very unique style.. the words were so direct and short, it made this very powerful. beautiful* |
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Re: The long lost wind...to carry me through...
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by deadreckoning1983 on
Wednesday, 18th August 2004 @ 11:29:33 PM AEST
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| this was good but i don't get into the rhyming. but it was very expressive and honest. good write. |
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