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Simple Things
Contributed by
Silent-No-More
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Wednesday, 7th July 2004 @ 01:36:17 AM in AEST
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Things, so very simple and small
Can carry me away, make me fall
Like one more day, never mind years
Or one more beautiful, gentle tear
Things so simple,
Seemingly small
I wouldn’t dare
Ask for it all
I need the simple, smallish stuff
To hold your hand would be enough
A moment to glance into your eyes
To see the soul that therein lies
Simply - just one
Tiny memory more
And I swear
I’ll be forever yours
I want a little, tiny thing
To read the words you used to bring
For a sentence, I’ll forego the rest
Just tell me that you love me best
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Silent-No-More
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Re: Simple Things
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by Gentledove on
Wednesday, 7th July 2004 @ 01:59:39 AM AEST
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*clapping* This is *simply* wonderful. I love it.
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Re: Simple Things
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 7th July 2004 @ 04:42:26 AM AEST
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Beautiful, i think we all need the simple smallish stuff only some of us don't realize it. Well done.
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Re: Simple Things
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by lostinmyself on
Wednesday, 7th July 2004 @ 06:11:12 AM AEST
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Beautiful SNM.
I think its the small things that count.
"Things, so very simple and small
Can carry me away, make me fall
Like one more day, never mind years
Or one more beautiful, gentle tear"
Perfect. *hugs* Phil xxx
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Re: Simple Things
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 7th July 2004 @ 08:05:08 AM AEST
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| what a gentle wonderful way you have - i liked this very much - and great sentiment too. |
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Re: Simple Things
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by pixie on
Wednesday, 7th July 2004 @ 11:05:16 AM AEST
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awww wonderful write,
pixie xx |
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Re: Simple Things
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by forever_lonely on
Wednesday, 7th July 2004 @ 11:09:54 AM AEST
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'The smallest things bring the biggest smiles'
A wonderful and beautiful aura this gives, one that many will remember for weeks and months and years to come
I know myself that the aura this gives off will be remembered by me for eternity and them some
Also might i comment on the excellent structure and overall polish your style has in this write, draws the reader in and keeps them enwrapped in your every reflection
Beautiful
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Re: Simple Things
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 7th July 2004 @ 01:42:59 PM AEST
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It takes the little things to complete the big picture. You have style, structure and artistic perfection wrapped in a small package here. Wonderful write.
Hugs,
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Re: Simple Things
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by Luinil on
Thursday, 8th July 2004 @ 01:51:42 PM AEST
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| really really beautiful and excellent.. i also love the phrase "simple, smallish stuff". great write* |
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Re: Simple Things
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 10th July 2004 @ 11:06:09 PM AEST
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awww, so sweet:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Simple Things
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by Stitch on
Sunday, 18th July 2004 @ 02:40:41 AM AEST
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I know this feeling...desperation...sadness...longing. This is heart wrenching. Words are so seductive. A very effective write.
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Re: Simple Things
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 30th August 2004 @ 01:53:48 PM AEST
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This is...so simple yet so profound. It gets right to the point yet speaks volumes about you.
Did you get what you wanted? |
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Re: Simple Things
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 16th May 2006 @ 10:39:41 PM AEST
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| Simply sweet :-) ... and extraordinarily sweet. I love reading poems like this and this one was perfect to read. |
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