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Shadow
Contributed by
TheReturnOfx7
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Wednesday, 7th July 2004 @ 12:45:14 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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My shadow’s figure is lurking there behind me
Mocking every possible movement I could make
Returning all of my hateful stares dark and icy
Clouding my judgement, unable to see straight
Wrapping its fickle fingers round me
Feeling the nails pierce the flesh of my neck
Murder in the distance, coming quickly
The fragile jaws of death begin to peck
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Re: Shadow
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by venkat on
Wednesday, 7th July 2004 @ 01:53:40 AM AEST
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you have depicted the dark nature of a shadow very nicely..it is chilling..but the jaws of death must be very terrible..
its good.. venkat |
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Re: Shadow
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by katyqueen35 on
Wednesday, 7th July 2004 @ 02:55:57 AM AEST
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I agree with venkat ..
great write.. |
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