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FATE
Contributed by
twesten
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Tuesday, 6th July 2004 @ 11:42:42 PM in AEST
Topic:
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FATE
Hidden In the shadows, They are watching you.
Frightened like a child. You don't know what
to do. You listen very closely, but you barely
here a thing. Then out of nowhere, you here a
fatal ring. The buzzing of a bullet, heading
straight for you. You know it is too late now,
there's nothing you can do. Your falling on
the ground. Your blood is all around. Trying
to fight off death, your gasping for your breath.
but it is too late, this will be your fate.
T.West
Copyright ©
twesten
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2004-07-06 23:42:42]
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Re: FATE
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 6th July 2004 @ 11:53:03 PM AEST
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*sits back because he is speechless*
THis is too good. |
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Re: FATE
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by Lia on
Wednesday, 7th July 2004 @ 01:17:58 AM AEST
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| yikes! Gave me chills |
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Re: FATE
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by katyqueen35 on
Wednesday, 7th July 2004 @ 02:02:45 AM AEST
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SHIVERS YIKES..
GREAT WRITE. |
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