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she's all alone
Contributed by
NoahsARK
on
Tuesday, 6th July 2004 @ 09:52:17 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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She is all alone,
But nobody cares,
A torn up home,
With no food to spare,
She lives with her uncle,
Because her mom went insane,
She don't know her dad,
And she don't know his name,
So now she is all alone,
In her uncle's home,
She prays every night,
That she will move to a better home,
She gets rapped,
And abused every night,
But then one night she tries to fight,
And he beats her,
And the neighbors heard,
But their to scared to even say a word,
Then a cop who was passing by,
Goes up to the door and hears someone cry,
He called some back up,
And went inside,
by the time he got her uncle off of her,
There was blood all over the floor,
Copyright ©
NoahsARK
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2004-07-06 21:52:17]
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Re: she's all alone
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by brokenwings on
Tuesday, 6th July 2004 @ 10:02:47 PM AEST
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words cannot express the tears...very good write
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Re: she's all alone
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 6th July 2004 @ 10:03:43 PM AEST
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A masterpeice of agony.
Written well.
I hope this is jus writing.
luv, huggs,
emy |
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Re: she's all alone
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by RobertKilpatrick on
Tuesday, 6th July 2004 @ 10:25:26 PM AEST
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| Heavy, I feel the pain...good write |
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Re: she's all alone
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by Essentially9 on
Tuesday, 6th July 2004 @ 10:27:25 PM AEST
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| very emotional indeed. |
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Re: she's all alone
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by pixie on
Wednesday, 7th July 2004 @ 11:14:08 AM AEST
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wow, this is very powerful.....what more can I say..
pixie xx |
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