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I Remember
Contributed by
Ceres
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Tuesday, 6th July 2004 @ 09:40:32 PM in AEST
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I drove to the spot
where we always used to meet.
It brought back so many memories
that I didn't want to see.
I remember bragging about you to my friends.
I remember our first kiss under a full moon.
But most of all I remember...
My mistake,
to turn and walk away.
My loss,
to turn my back on you and walk out of your life,
that I made you walk out of mine.
I shed some tears and started home, so far away,
but they silently kept coming.
I tried to brush them away but they soaked my sleeve.
I couldn't get you out of my mind.
Through the tears I saw times when we were together
and we were happy.
But most of all I remember...
My mistake,
to turn and walk away.
My loss,
to turn my back on you and walk out of your life,
that I made you walk out of mine.
My mistake,
to turn and walk away.
My loss,
to turn my back on you and walk out of your life,
that I locked you out of mine.
That I locked you out of mine...
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Ceres
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2004-07-06 21:40:32]
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Re: I Remember
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by Silent-No-More on
Tuesday, 6th July 2004 @ 10:13:28 PM AEST
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Oh! gosh... I get this. A few of my recent pieces are filled with the same.... the wretched consideration that you've lost someone because... well, you know. It does hurt. I completely emphasize. I cannot offer any answers... for I've not found them myself.
This piece is beautifully honest and tragically relatable, I'm afraid. Well done!
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Re: I Remember
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by Fionndruinne on
Monday, 12th July 2004 @ 06:28:38 PM AEST
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This is well-written and quite impressive. Welcome to YPDC!
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