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Make Me One With Rain
Contributed by
xxbreathlessx
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Tuesday, 6th July 2004 @ 08:19:45 PM in AEST
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eat these problems away from me
swallow them into non-existence
ease my sorrow and the feel of being lonely
Breath away my pain.
Kidnap me into the stars,
Make Me One With Rain.
Dry these tears from my eyes,
and drown my fears that control my life.
Surround me with the presence of happiness
and not the solitude of pain.
Make Me One With Rain.
Let me dance through the air,
Feel freedom at my fingertips.
Fly from a spacious beauty,
labeled a sky.
To fall away from pain,
Make Me One With Rain.
I will be the music,
that drifts you off to sleep.
I will be the fingers tapping your window
as you sit and weep.
I will soak you with my love
wet you with my kisses.
on dry, dry months
I’m the one everyone misses.
please let me slip away from pain...
Make Me One With Rain.
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xxbreathlessx
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2004-07-06 20:19:45]
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Re: Make Me One With Rain
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by RobertKilpatrick on
Tuesday, 6th July 2004 @ 08:33:43 PM AEST
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| Powerful. Very good use of words. |
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Re: Make Me One With Rain
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by arden on
Tuesday, 6th July 2004 @ 08:42:34 PM AEST
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please let me slip away from pain...
Make Me One With Rain
wow love that line! this was awesome. loved it. nicely written. powerful. well done keep it up.
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Re: Make Me One With Rain
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by Sinful_Misery on
Tuesday, 6th July 2004 @ 09:04:51 PM AEST
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| Hey thanks for the comments :) You are an awesome writer as well. This poem is moving. |
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Re: Make Me One With Rain
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by Jacquelynne on
Tuesday, 6th July 2004 @ 10:34:11 PM AEST
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this is really good, it sounds like song lyrics, so rythmic and moving. Have you, or will you, put music behind it? you should....
hugs'n'kisses
jenni
aka
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Re: Make Me One With Rain
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 7th July 2004 @ 08:07:24 PM AEST
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sweet:) hugs n' love nessa
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