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Assurance
Contributed by
Sinful_Misery
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Tuesday, 6th July 2004 @ 07:31:28 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Productive outcomes,
Sinful thought,
Inspirational genious,
Yet had to be taught
Firm grasp on reality,
Shunning from the past,
Helping the matter,
Can resolve this at last
Lost and alone,
Yet surrounded by everyone,
Feelings of dismay,
Weigh upon my back a tonne
A hierarchy of madness,
Harmonious acts of discretion
Setting the bar where its needed
Organizing each thought in its section
Intricate formulas,
Alluding the rest
Attempting to give,
Showing your best
Freedom to roam,
Pressure of my life
Swaying back and forth
Cutting, like the blade of a knife
Regretting what is past,
Concentrating on the future
Throw away the pessimistic views,
Then truly, can yourself assure.
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Re: Assurance
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by xxbreathlessx on
Tuesday, 6th July 2004 @ 09:17:43 PM AEST
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| wow thats really good, i really liked it, love the vocab! great job! |
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Re: Assurance
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 17th August 2004 @ 10:23:39 AM AEST
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A hierarchy of madness,
Harmonious acts of discretion
Setting the bar where its needed
Organizing each thought in its section
Wonderful. This is another example of where poetry of today misses its target, and poets like yourself remind us of how poetry is supposed to look, sound, and feel.
This poem is a sword in the battle of making poetry read again. It's not contemporary blunt like carma felt bull sh#t like 99 percent of modern poetry. The vocabulary is excellent. The feel is embracing and dark. The life blood of this poem is a passionate author! I loved it! |
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