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guilt trip
Contributed by
jade_elephant
on
Tuesday, 6th July 2004 @ 05:54:26 PM in AEST
Topic:
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So thats the sudden interest,
Thats the sudden change,
You feel the guilt welling up,
Eating your insides?
Tearing at your tendons,
Biting through the bone,
Enveloping every cell until,
Youre going to explode?
Well thanks for all the kindness,
I know was so heartfelt,
Thanks for lending me all that time,
In which I had no importance.
You are moving up and on,
And although I know im not forgotten,
The need you still feel, the desire to bring me down,
Shows I still have an impact upon you.
In every way possible,
I wish I was forgotten.
Copyright ©
jade_elephant
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2004-07-06 17:54:26]
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Re: guilt trip
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by Heartfilledblood on
Tuesday, 6th July 2004 @ 05:59:13 PM AEST
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| Good poem. I understand what you mean. I can easily relate too this poem. |
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Re: guilt trip
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 6th July 2004 @ 07:10:34 PM AEST
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| Well put. The line between assertiveness and agressiveness is hard to follow. Hope things improve! |
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Re: guilt trip
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by WestCPunk on
Tuesday, 6th July 2004 @ 07:39:22 PM AEST
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| Pretty good. It reminds me of someone i wish i USED to know! |
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Re: guilt trip
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by xxbreathlessx on
Tuesday, 6th July 2004 @ 08:37:59 PM AEST
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| wow very powerful, i like it great job. |
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Re: guilt trip
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by Pyrofungus on
Friday, 9th July 2004 @ 02:02:55 AM AEST
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this is great!
please comment on my work
summer |
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Re: guilt trip
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by dolly_dagger on
Sunday, 11th July 2004 @ 12:51:21 PM AEST
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you're strong enough to deal with this, and i think this poem confirms it. just remember you're moving up and on too, and that i love u hun!
great writing, v. edgy.
xxx |
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