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Hopes Dreams Ambitions.
Contributed by
heartfilledblood
on
Tuesday, 6th July 2004 @ 05:30:05 PM in AEST
Topic:
happypoetry
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My dream is too please you
The people
The world
Whether it be making you laugh
Or jammin a tune
My dream is to be remembered
As a great entertainer
With no help
But what I save in the bank
I will make this happen
For no one will stop me
For I need no help
To keep me up
My dream is live on my own
WIth no ones help
To raise a family
To see my young ones
As I watch them grow up
My dream is to raise a family
With a loved one at my side
With many dreams at hand
I hope too accomplish them all
As I for when I retire I can look back
At a life full of succsess
Copyright ©
heartfilledblood
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2004-07-06 17:30:05]
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Re: Hopes Dreams Ambitions.
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by Gentledove on
Tuesday, 6th July 2004 @ 05:34:42 PM AEST
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Dream can be realized with hard work. nice write about your dreams.
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Re: Hopes Dreams Ambitions.
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by tifrob on
Tuesday, 6th July 2004 @ 06:22:30 PM AEST
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I applaud your poem. It was great! I wish more people had your outlook on life. Great Poem.
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Re: Hopes Dreams Ambitions.
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 1st August 2004 @ 07:56:49 PM AEST
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Daric, this is truly the man I know you to be in the extremely short time I chatted with you. This is a good write. This is full of attainable hopes and dreams and goals for a decent happy life. Yes, there are bumps even in 'perfect' lives but I know you have the inner strength to prevail and make this come to fruition. Yes, you can and will.
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Re: Hopes Dreams Ambitions.
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by Broken_Skin on
Monday, 2nd August 2004 @ 12:22:49 PM AEST
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This was beautiful, very thought provoking
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