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Go Away
Contributed by
wakegurl77
on
Tuesday, 6th July 2004 @ 03:34:06 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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Why are you such an ***?
go away, leave fast!
i want to slap you,
punch you
kick your ***** ***
why are you such a ***** disgrace
your embaresed of me
why cant you look me in the face
you want me out of you life
stay out of mine then too!!
***** you Justin
i hate your guts
so what if you blood
you drive me ***** Nuts
go away
and leave me alone
i can't stand you *****
Mood swings
you pms like a girl
go away
and stay there
theres no more music to
bring us together
so i give up on you
FOREVER
Copyright ©
wakegurl77
... [
2004-07-06 15:34:06]
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Re: Go Away
(User Rating: 1 )
by C2C on
Tuesday, 6th July 2004 @ 03:43:03 PM AEST
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Wow, it sure does express what you feel! Though i have to admire you for writing it out and not taking another form of action, since it looks like you were royally ticked off.
~Tuesday~ |
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Re: Go Away
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by Bones on
Tuesday, 6th July 2004 @ 04:11:35 PM AEST
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| Good poem. Alot anger too. Expressing one's personal feelings in a poem always gives the poem a very good touch. And I believe this poem is awesome. Alot of profanity though. But, hey...it's not like you're not gonna have a poem with profanity in it. 4/5 |
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Re: Go Away
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by Kirby on
Saturday, 10th July 2004 @ 08:41:41 PM AEST
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| All poems do not have to rhyme and I respect a person more then they don't. This is a really great poem. It's fun to write when you are mad! I have also said a guy has pms! They don't enjoy that much! lol! WEll great poem anyways. Love::::Kirby |
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