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Tear of Confusion
Contributed by
forgottensorrow
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Tuesday, 6th July 2004 @ 03:25:38 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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A tear falls down my face
How could I end up in such a place?
A place I never wanted to be
Never wanted to hear of
Never wanted to see
A place of confusion
Lost souls mixed up into an illusion
One that wants us to feel left out
Screaming, crying, shouting out
For love, for peace, for solitude
We can grasp one at a time
Never enough to satisfy
Our wants, our needs, our desires
Too much confusion
I want out of this illusion
Out of this place
As another tear streams down my face
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forgottensorrow
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2004-07-06 15:25:38]
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Re: Tear of Confusion
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by C2C on
Tuesday, 6th July 2004 @ 03:29:02 PM AEST
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Cheers to that! There is never enough time for wants and needs....but you have to admit, if we got everything we wanted at a blink, we wouldn't be as motivated as we are. Really makes one enjoy the little things.
I like the way your poem flows. :D
~Tuesday~ |
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Re: Tear of Confusion
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by Bones on
Tuesday, 6th July 2004 @ 04:15:40 PM AEST
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| I love this poem. 5/5! This world is really an illusion if you really think out it...ya know? |
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Re: Tear of Confusion
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by tifrob on
Tuesday, 6th July 2004 @ 07:03:02 PM AEST
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I've been here! Tears and all.
J~ |
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Re: Tear of Confusion
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by Kirby on
Saturday, 10th July 2004 @ 08:44:20 PM AEST
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| This is a really great poem. I can relate to this at times in my life. Keep on writing like this. Love::::Kirby |
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