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My Red Rose Shine To You
Contributed by
parkman
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Tuesday, 6th July 2004 @ 02:11:26 PM in AEST
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My Red Rose
My red rose stands so strong, shines beauty everywhere
I whisper to it gently, I treat it with great care
It's petals are so fragile, I water them each day
They open out so perfect, a wonderful display
I watch a bee land on it, move gently all about
I wish that I was that bee, sucking the nectar out
I cup my hand around it and sniff its scent so pure
I touch the silken petals, so soft and so demure
My red rose is perfect, not a petal out of place
I look at it each day and see a smiling face
Last thing at night, I spray it with my hose
And go to bed dreaming, of my beautiful red red rose
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Shine To You
I shine to you, I shine for you
The heat I generate, can burn right through
You light up my day, I light up your night
I burn a torch, that for you, burns so bright
You shine for me, you constantly glow
As time races by, my love I can't show
Our love can only blossom, like flowers in springtime
And like this light, we can only shine
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Re: My Red Rose Shine To You
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by parkman on
Tuesday, 6th July 2004 @ 02:24:18 PM AEST
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| Star my angel, sorry about typo, was meant to be, my star not mr star xxx |
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Re: My Red Rose Shine To You
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by kammie on
Tuesday, 6th July 2004 @ 02:53:56 PM AEST
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they are both wonderful poems !!! sucha pleasure to read and with a simple beauty
thankyou for such great poems
love
kammie xx |
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Re: My Red Rose Shine To You
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by C2C on
Tuesday, 6th July 2004 @ 03:00:31 PM AEST
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| Awe, those are cute. A romantic at heart. You really make me want to buy flowers, and get a rose bush of my own. |
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Re: My Red Rose Shine To You
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by Gentledove on
Tuesday, 6th July 2004 @ 03:00:40 PM AEST
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a beautiful write about love.
Gentledove |
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Re: My Red Rose Shine To You
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by sweetangeluk on
Tuesday, 6th July 2004 @ 03:42:20 PM AEST
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Both beautiful poems.
Roses sem to have that beauty romance and purity. fab
Love Sweetangelukxxxxxx |
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Re: My Red Rose Shine To You
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 6th July 2004 @ 04:57:11 PM AEST
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Simply beautiful. Both poems are tremendous.
Rita |
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Re: My Red Rose Shine To You
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by starlight4215 on
Tuesday, 6th July 2004 @ 05:03:47 PM AEST
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| Thank you darling, I love you with all my heart, always and forever xxx ( Glad i'm not Mr Star ) lol |
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Re: My Red Rose Shine To You
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by pixie on
Wednesday, 7th July 2004 @ 11:23:14 AM AEST
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lovely poems
pixie xx |
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Re: My Red Rose Shine To You
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by Kirby on
Saturday, 10th July 2004 @ 09:04:21 PM AEST
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Great poems. I especialy liked the last one.
and like this light, we can only shine
such a powerful sentence. Great writes. Love::::Kirby |
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