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Jeweled Reflections
Contributed by
avriljunkie
on
Tuesday, 6th July 2004 @ 01:54:56 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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I can't stop this.
I'm in a downward spiral,
falling faster with each passing second.
Blood mixes with salty tears streaming
down my face.
Finding its resting place on my already
bloodied razor.
A broken mirror lays upon the floor.
Each shattered piece reflecting traces
of sunlight.
Rose petals surround these crystal pieces,
trying to cover up the damage that
has been done.
But not even the softest of flowers
can repair this
broken mirror.
This broken image.
This broken soul.
Copyright ©
avriljunkie
... [
2004-07-06 13:54:56]
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Re: Jeweled Reflections
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by code on
Tuesday, 6th July 2004 @ 02:12:41 PM AEST
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I have never "Cut" or anything, but I really like the way you describe this. This is one of those poems that is truly great because it conveys your feelings in a way that allows the reader to feel as though they are sitting right there watching your struggle. Excellent!
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Re: Jeweled Reflections
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by xxbreathlessx on
Tuesday, 6th July 2004 @ 02:35:44 PM AEST
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wow o wow o wow, i LOVED this! i can relate to it ( i USE to do it) and i especially love these words
"Rose petals surround these crystal pieces,
trying to cover up the damage that
has been done.
But not even the softest of flowers
can repair this
broken mirror.
This broken image.
This broken soul."
lol i know its almost the whole poem =), what can i say you did an extremly great job on this!
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Re: Jeweled Reflections
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by wakegurl77 on
Tuesday, 6th July 2004 @ 03:42:08 PM AEST
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| great poem you really captured the moment when you finish your cut and look back on it i can totally realate to this poem i've cut myself then after i look at the blood and the tears and i find my self calling a friend i hope you have a friend you can lean on like i had. |
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Re: Jeweled Reflections
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by gery_giggles on
Tuesday, 6th July 2004 @ 04:04:50 PM AEST
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i cut and i know this feeling very well...i liked the imagery..sucha dark poem,,,great job!
luv always |
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