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Forgone Conclusions
Contributed by
code
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Tuesday, 6th July 2004 @ 01:43:22 PM in AEST
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Saw you in the distance, fading like a star
Recoiled evolution, burnt out Arctic Char
A visionary loophole, contrived by man
Secondary nature, its all the master plan
With no purpose, I watch the banter unfold
Hallucinations surrender, the madness unfolds
Of this man, hallowed from core to bone
Broken & Black, my how you've grown
So, on to the next set of retributions
Bury the axe, reach no conclusions
Swim to the edge, just to watch yourself drown
Dizzy your tongue, try to reach a verbal noun
I've got got a place to seek shelter there
Aleve your relief’s and destroy your fears
And when you tire and want to feel whole
Just stop at the ledge, the answer lies in your soul.
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Re: Forgone Conclusions
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by xxbreathlessx on
Tuesday, 6th July 2004 @ 02:37:39 PM AEST
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| wow, what an ending! i liked it!!! great job! |
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Re: Forgone Conclusions
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by Archie on
Saturday, 14th August 2004 @ 02:27:20 PM AEST
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There is a deeper meaning to this poem, I can sense it but I will not reveal it because I respect the heart in which you have written it.
Are greatest answers often come from questions |
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