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A closer look
Contributed by
dreaded_Axe_of_gore
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Tuesday, 6th July 2004 @ 01:11:53 PM in AEST
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LostLove
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Maybe I should have taken a closer look
The truth is distorted and I was blinded by mindless love
It seems your getting tired of me, bored of me
I think Ive lost all that I have gained
I should have seen it coming
Its all the same
History repeats itself and I ignored all the signs
I guess it serves me right, trust is something I should be more conservative with
What will it really matter later on?
I guess I should have taken a closer look
This is just another step in my life
I look at things as obstacles
They may boost me
I may trip over them and fall face first in the mud
The only sure thing is that I will continue to learn and progress
The feeling of hate and bitterness are know fading
As I walk into the horizon
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2004-07-06 13:11:53]
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Re: A closer look
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by pixie on
Tuesday, 6th July 2004 @ 01:13:49 PM AEST
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yes this is different from your usual writes, but it was good :)
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Re: A closer look
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by bobotheclown on
Tuesday, 6th July 2004 @ 03:55:50 PM AEST
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good poem I liked the sort of questioning nature in this poem. I liked how it ended gave the poem a sense of completion.
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