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Not An Angel
Contributed by
screamingfromwithin
on
Tuesday, 6th July 2004 @ 12:04:36 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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If you'll count my tears
You will see my fears-
Fears of every word and deed.
If you'll feel my pain
You'll become insane.
You'll cut yourself until you'll bleed.
If you'll walk in my shoes
You'll see there's nothing to lose
But a worthless aching soul.
If you'll feed my heart
you will fall apart.
You'll know why I lost control.
Cry with me everyday,
Die with me every night.
Say what i always say:
"I will be alright!"
But I'm not an angel,
And god doesn't love me.
I'm not an angel.
No one's thinking of me.
If you'll think my thoughts
You'll see evil dots
Inside my twisted mind.
If you'll look through my eyes
At the mirror that lies...
Maybe I'm better off blind!
I hate myself everyday
Lets see you hate yourself every night!
Say with me what I must say:
"I can win this fight!"
But I'm not an angel
And I cannot save myself.
How can I undo
All the things that I gave myself?
We hate ourselves everyday,
We die alone every night.
We say what we learned to say:
"We are all alright!"
But we are not angels
And god doesn't love us.
There are no angels
Flying above us.
No, we are not angels
And no one can save us.
No one can undo
All the things that they gave us.
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screamingfromwithin
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2004-07-06 12:04:36]
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Re: Not An Angel
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by pixie on
Tuesday, 6th July 2004 @ 12:22:02 PM AEST
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this is really sad and emotional, thanks for sharing,
great write,
pixie xx |
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Re: Not An Angel
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by kailadragon on
Tuesday, 6th July 2004 @ 12:23:06 PM AEST
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| i love the raw emotion in this.........i think there are many who can identify with exactly how you feel, including me.......great write |
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Re: Not An Angel
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 6th July 2004 @ 12:50:45 PM AEST
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I can relate to the anguish. This emotional piece conveys pain within. Releasing feels good. Know you're not alone.
Angel always...joni |
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Re: Not An Angel
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by xxbreathlessx on
Tuesday, 6th July 2004 @ 02:41:10 PM AEST
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| i agree with pixie, it is very sad and emotional, i liked the flow of it and everything..but i disagree when you say God dosn`t love you..God loves everyone, it dosnt matter what you`ve done...but besides that i liked your poem. |
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