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Emeralds
Contributed by
darkfairy1188
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Tuesday, 6th July 2004 @ 10:19:01 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Emeralds.
Bright and sparkling.
Just like your eyes.
They have haunted me through the nights.
Glowing bright in the candlelight.
Emeralds.
Shining in the sun.
Like the metal on your gun.
Emeralds.
Green like the grass;
On that Monday morning;
When your blood came pouring;
Down your chest;
From the hole.
I guess your aim wasn’t the best.
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2004-07-06 10:19:01]
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Re: Emeralds
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by Bones on
Tuesday, 6th July 2004 @ 10:23:16 AM AEST
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| Very good. This is one of the darkest poems I've read in a long while. It kinda makes me think of a woman with beautiful eyes commiting suicide. Now this is a real dark poem...I love it. 5/5 |
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Re: Emeralds
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by lostinmyself on
Tuesday, 6th July 2004 @ 10:27:16 AM AEST
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Ooooh, i like this....
you're right. i dont understand it. But it is briiliant, i love the way you use emeralds to describe things.
good write
*hugs you* Phil xxx |
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Re: Emeralds
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by Monkeybones99 on
Tuesday, 6th July 2004 @ 10:35:57 AM AEST
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| Even if I don't understand it completly it not hard to see that it's a great write. |
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Re: Emeralds
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by hannahbanana on
Tuesday, 6th July 2004 @ 10:39:41 AM AEST
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| VERY POWERFUL...WELL DONE. THIS IS A FANTASTIC WRITE. |
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Re: Emeralds
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by Katie2008 on
Tuesday, 6th July 2004 @ 07:40:29 PM AEST
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A beautiful poem written about a person who couldn't take the sh**t life seems throw. A beautiful write, I love your stuff! *muh!*
Katie |
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Re: Emeralds
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by RobertKilpatrick on
Sunday, 11th July 2004 @ 08:48:55 PM AEST
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Nice title.. The poem is stark and rather different. and the ending is great.. Great poem
Cheers Robert |
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