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Goodbye My Love
Contributed by
LovingWhispers
on
Tuesday, 6th July 2004 @ 07:56:50 AM in AEST
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I've held you in my hands,with your blood I've penned my tears
We've always been inseperable,together for more than 20 years
Everywhere I've travelled,through happiness and strife
You were always there my love,in every chapter of my life
We've shared cold lonely nights,by the window watching storms
Right there in the wings,your presence safe and warm
On beautiful summer days,we would walk up to the pond
As I held you I would dream,and you would write the song
Never have you failed me,you've never argued with my ways
Moreso you've been my saviour,through each and every day
But it seems that I am ailing,the time has come for me to die
And so to you my lover,my pen,I must sadly say goodbye
Copyright ©
LovingWhispers
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2004-07-06 07:56:50]
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Re: Goodbye My Love
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 6th July 2004 @ 09:48:43 AM AEST
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This is sooooo sad. When our loved ones pass on it's one hardship, but to say good-bye while we're still alive. Heartwrenching to say the least. May the loving whispers of the wind guide that beautiful spirit always!
Angel always...joni |
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Re: Goodbye My Love
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by Jenni_K on
Tuesday, 6th July 2004 @ 11:06:03 AM AEST
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Beautifully penned, Whisper..I hope it is a work of fiction....Wishing you all the best always....
Hugs
Jenni |
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Re: Goodbye My Love
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by Ilhar on
Tuesday, 6th July 2004 @ 03:37:18 PM AEST
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please tell me this is not so...my friend for i could not take the loss to the world....
Shari |
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Re: Goodbye My Love
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by DreamWeaver on
Sunday, 11th July 2004 @ 03:32:14 AM AEST
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| Don't stop writing Sharon, for truly you have a remarkable gift ... dont' say goodbye ... I've often felt this way myself in the last few months, but in the end I believe, our pen is our best friend to help us through ... Jan |
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Re: Goodbye My Love
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by RobertKilpatrick on
Sunday, 11th July 2004 @ 07:57:41 PM AEST
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Wo there is a lot of emotion and feeling here..I feel the pain.... Great write.
Cheers Robert |
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Re: Goodbye My Love
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by blueheart on
Sunday, 11th July 2004 @ 10:39:20 PM AEST
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This was so sad, it touched me so.
The pen is also my source of comfort during my trying days and a channel of my emotion when I dwell in happiness. |
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Re: Goodbye My Love
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by Rakerman1999 on
Tuesday, 13th July 2004 @ 07:26:55 PM AEST
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You have far too much to say yet my friend, to be saying goodbye to your pen. You write with a newness each time even if you don't see it. I certainly do and so does everyone else. You are a heart with a pen attached rememeber?
Beautifully written
Roses
Larry |
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Re: Goodbye My Love
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by Stitch on
Wednesday, 14th July 2004 @ 12:26:39 PM AEST
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The time for writing ebbs and flows
throughout our lives, it comes and goes
I know the muse will return and then
you'll want to pick up your pen again
Stitch |
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Re: Goodbye My Love
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by venkat on
Tuesday, 20th July 2004 @ 12:33:37 AM AEST
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This is so sad..I think there is no death fo a poet's pen so long as the poet's heart beats.
A great write. venkat
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