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The Princess and the Fairy
Contributed by
Gentledove
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Tuesday, 6th July 2004 @ 02:20:01 AM in AEST
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As I look through the eyes of my 4 year old neice,
My world expands, it's on the increase.
She say, Come on Auntie Gay, come upstairs to play,
I want to dance a ballet today.
She digs in her closet, picks out her attire,
A beautiful dress with sequins and sapphires.
We dance a ballet just Bailey and I,
We swirl and twirl, I try to be spry,
As we dance the dance of the firefly.
It's time to change and be a princess,
As Cinderella puts on her necklace.
Rubys, diamonds and glittering gold,
A sweet beautiful princess, a sight to behold.
The day is done, it's getting late,
Fairies and princesses, their beds await,
As up the stairs we must navigate.
I tell her I love her as I hug her tight,
Maybe tomorrow you could be Snow White.
a
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Gentledove
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Re: The Princess and the Fairy
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 6th July 2004 @ 02:27:53 AM AEST
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sweet:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: The Princess and the Fairy
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 6th July 2004 @ 03:26:32 AM AEST
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wow....this is....I am speechless...such a happy thought, No really, you'll have to excuse me, I need a moment...
...Good job, this is beyound great. |
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Re: The Princess and the Fairy
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by venkat on
Tuesday, 6th July 2004 @ 05:41:51 AM AEST
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| Awww..this is action packed. sweeetly touching..very nice poem. quite refreshing. venkat |
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Re: The Princess and the Fairy
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by pixie on
Tuesday, 6th July 2004 @ 06:15:36 AM AEST
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awwww this is lovely... such a sweet write, I often wish that I saw the world through a childs eyes,.as there is too much hate in the world, kids dont see all that.....
loved your poem,
pixie xx |
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Re: The Princess and the Fairy
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by darkfairy1188 on
Tuesday, 6th July 2004 @ 11:00:27 AM AEST
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| i like this poem. im 15 and i still like to play dress-up! lol. |
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Re: The Princess and the Fairy
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by RonMiller on
Tuesday, 6th July 2004 @ 11:44:58 AM AEST
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This is a fun poem with a pleasant flow :0)
Ron |
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Re: The Princess and the Fairy
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 6th July 2004 @ 03:12:46 PM AEST
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Hi, I hope you don't mind if I print this out and put it in the folder I keep for my grandchildren. I print all the children's poems that are posted and the ones I write for them in a special folder. They like them better than the storybooks at bedtime. This is an excellent piece.
Rita |
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Re: The Princess and the Fairy
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by RobertKilpatrick on
Tuesday, 6th July 2004 @ 09:55:22 PM AEST
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| Really nice poem, Really good use of words. Colourful pictures, love it.. |
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Re: The Princess and the Fairy
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by Jenni_K on
Wednesday, 7th July 2004 @ 12:10:58 AM AEST
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Welcome to YPDC....This is an excellent piece of work... I can imagine all the fun you have with her.....
Hope to see lots more....and thank you for your comment on my latest poem...
Jenni |
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Re: The Princess and the Fairy
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by Lia on
Wednesday, 7th July 2004 @ 06:14:31 PM AEST
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| awww how cute this is! Playing dress up with my lil girls reminds me so much of my younger days..makes me feel that young again :) |
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Re: The Princess and the Fairy
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by Thunderwolf on
Sunday, 11th July 2004 @ 12:19:10 AM AEST
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Bailey is very lucky to have you for an aunt and me for an uncle. lol
love ya, Thunderwolf |
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Re: The Princess and the Fairy
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by Tanmaya on
Tuesday, 20th July 2004 @ 05:48:44 AM AEST
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Lovely poem.
Very sweet and full of the magic of childhood. |
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Re: The Princess and the Fairy
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 20th July 2004 @ 06:03:59 AM AEST
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Such a lovely poem, Gentledove. It reminds me of the times I'll get to spend with my own neice . . .
Thoughtful, rhythmic and picturesque.
Thanks for sharing. |
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