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Why I Love You
Contributed by
veruca
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Tuesday, 6th July 2004 @ 12:20:12 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I feel your soft lips brush across my face
A kiss is what your coming to take,
I feel your fingers run through my hair
So I turn my head to give you a loving stare,
My heart starts pounding when you hold me tight
But I' m not sure if this is right,
My love for you is strong
Our life together will be very long,
You always know what to say
When I' m having one of those bad days,
And you always pour your heart out
but I dont believe you and that makes you pout,
But you know that I will forever love you
For you are the one who loves me too
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veruca
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2004-07-06 00:20:12]
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Re: Why I Love You
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by C2C on
Tuesday, 6th July 2004 @ 12:24:56 AM AEST
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Awe, that's cute. Nothing like love. Though, the rhyming sounds a little stressed.
~Tuesday |
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Re: Why I Love You
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by Steven on
Tuesday, 6th July 2004 @ 12:38:03 AM AEST
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| i like that. c2c is wrong about the rhyming soundin stressed. it sounds great to me |
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Re: Why I Love You
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 6th July 2004 @ 12:58:14 AM AEST
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beautifully sweet:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Why I Love You
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by pixie on
Tuesday, 6th July 2004 @ 04:47:11 AM AEST
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lovely poem, love is great....
pixie xx |
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