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HATE
Contributed by
devils_daughter18
on
Monday, 5th July 2004 @ 10:58:51 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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I try not to cry...
keep a smile on my face...
i wish i could vanish...
without a ***** trace...
i try to act strong...
try to hide all my tears...
but i am sitting here drowning...
in all of my fears...
all those that i love...
are drifting away...
all those that have hurt me...
will soon pay...
i cry all alone...
i lost all my friends...
i wish my life...
would come to an end...
i'm sick of the hurt...
i am sick of the pain...
i ***** hate you...
you drive me insane...
you purposely hurt me...
you make me cry...
i hate myself...
i wish i would die...
i look in the mirror...
i hate what i see...
i stare at myself...
and wonder "why me?"
i've picked up a blade...
feel it peirce through my skin...
i knew that eventually...
i would give in...
an "H" for the hurt...
i go through each day...
an "A" for the *****...
who all get their way...
a "T" for the tears...
i cry late at night...
an "E" for my enemies...
who cause me such frieght...
i hate this world...
i hate this *****...
i'm giving up everyhing...
can't take this quit...
i continue to carve...
continue to cry...
not gonna bother...
to say good-bye.
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2004-07-05 22:58:51]
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Re: HATE
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by Rhei76 on
Monday, 5th July 2004 @ 11:03:49 PM AEST
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| Strong hard poem, nice write. God bless you and take care. |
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Re: HATE
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by ginsdance on
Monday, 5th July 2004 @ 11:07:08 PM AEST
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strong words. good write. I wonder though, is the narrator carving at herself, or is she carving through the hate that she feels?
Good write, excellent piece,
Ginsdance |
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Re: HATE
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by TheCure2AnInsomniacsDream on
Tuesday, 6th July 2004 @ 02:14:41 PM AEST
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| This seems like a poem lacking a lot of hope, but the only thing i could say is that if the date at the top was when you wrote this then at least you have not gone without a good-bye, i hope that you are or have recovered from whatever caused you such hate and pain. Keep writing great poems. |
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