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Tiny Soldier
Contributed by
InnerBeautyQueen
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Monday, 5th July 2004 @ 10:47:29 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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A tiny little girl
Deminishing frame
Raised up in purity
Never to kill or to maim
Not much for weapons
Only the sword
Her fencing lessons
Which she truly adored
But not by her side
Her chosen best friend
A gun there resides
Until the dear end
She'd weep for the others
Behind death's closed door
But there's a battle to fight
To help win the war
Her hair pulled up tight
And her heart curtained shut
She marches with soldiers
No fear in her strut
Copyright ©
InnerBeautyQueen
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2004-07-05 22:47:29]
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Re: Tiny Soldier
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by tifrob on
Monday, 5th July 2004 @ 10:59:07 PM AEST
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I loved the flow of your words. It was a joy to read. I like this style of poetry.
J~ |
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Re: Tiny Soldier
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by evilfairy on
Monday, 5th July 2004 @ 11:06:32 PM AEST
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a very well written poem (as per usual IBQ)
this one reminds me of my sister |
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