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Misty Shores Of Loss
Contributed by
mdmorash
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Monday, 5th July 2004 @ 10:13:07 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Sonnet #4
In the mist I see things I thought were gone.
As I’m moving near they just fade away.
All seems to be lost, though I carry on.
All I want is you back with me someday.
Have you seen my tears wash away the rain?
Have you heard my cries carried by the breeze?
All I’ve known of me, lost within the pain.
Knowing that you’re gone brings me to my knees.
Now I search for you, though I know not where.
Is the end like this, silent and alone?
Or is there still hope, a chance you still care?
Though my past is dark, so much to atone.
I will travel on, trying to withstand.
All I’ve ever lost, slipping from my hand.
Michael David Morash
Copyright © 2004
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mdmorash
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2004-07-05 22:13:07]
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Re: Misty Shores Of Loss
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 5th July 2004 @ 10:49:39 PM AEST
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Your poem is lovely. I remember feeling like that in my life. I hope all is better for you.
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Re: Misty Shores Of Loss
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by bobotheclown on
Monday, 5th July 2004 @ 11:57:56 PM AEST
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wow t his was a beautiful sonnet it is rare that one sees such beautiful, well written poetry these days. my heat goes off to you for writing a difficult form of poetry and doing so exquisitely.
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