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Final Goodbye
Contributed by
chayanya
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Monday, 5th July 2004 @ 09:23:46 PM in AEST
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Ive made up my mind
Im going for now
A place without hardship
I now know just how
Now don't say you'll miss me
And dont say goodbye
Theres no understanding
Theres no reason why
So tired of others
The judgement they show
Its wearing me down now
Im ready to go
This prose and this verse
The legacy i send
This night my beginning,
This evening my end
Copyright ©
chayanya
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2004-07-05 21:23:46]
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Re: Final Goodbye
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by emystar on
Monday, 5th July 2004 @ 09:34:21 PM AEST
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Well, I'm happy to hear u didn't take the exit.
Good work.
luv, huggs,
emy |
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Re: Final Goodbye
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by Silent-No-More on
Monday, 5th July 2004 @ 10:28:31 PM AEST
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Well - please keep "babbling" and we'll keep reading! What a powerful, though chilling, first post!
Welcome to YPDC! Thanks for sharing this... I'm looking forward to reading more of your work!
Wishing for you a much longer legacy,
SNM |
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Re: Final Goodbye
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by tifrob on
Monday, 5th July 2004 @ 11:51:39 PM AEST
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I enjoyed reading this poem. Keep writing.
J~ |
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Re: Final Goodbye
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by pixie on
Tuesday, 6th July 2004 @ 04:41:37 AM AEST
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very great write, you have great flow and expression, hope to read more soon,
pixie xx |
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